(4ème)Bonjour je ne suis pas très forte en anglais et j’aimerais que quelqu’un corrige mon texte en anglais merci par avance.
My Winter Break
During the holidays,I went skiing during the first week with my friands in the Alpe.We went sledding. I had a great time! Next, during the second week I came back to Paris in my home. I went shopping, I went for a walk with my parents and my brother then I went to the cinema and I watch movies. I didn’t go to disneyland and I didn’t eat ice cre

(4ème)Bonjour je ne suis pas très forte en anglais et j’aimerais que quelqu’un corrige mon texte en anglais merci par avance.
My Winter Break
During the holidays,I went skiing during the first week with my friands in the Alpe.We went sledding. I had a great time! Next, during the second week I came back to Paris in my home. I went shopping, I went for a walk with my parents and my brother then I went to the cinema and I watch movies. I didn’t go to disneyland and I didn’t eat ice cream but I had a blast.Finally, I do my homeworks.